如果您自己完成了留學文件，對文件內容結構等方面比較滿意，而對英語表達難以把握，那么，留學文書英語潤色（polish）服務能夠為您掃除后顧之憂。
外語專業的畢業生寫出來的英語大多也是“中國英語”，和真正地道的英語表達在行文的流暢性，用詞的準確性和文章的感染力等方面依然有很大差距。一般非英語專業的申請者更常見的弊端是：用詞過于生僻，通俗或華麗，語感別扭，不連貫，和中英思維方式差異帶來的背離原意，語義難懂等。
不論您的文件內容如何，蹩腳的英文表達乃至失誤會使錄取人員看您的申請材料的過程變得很“痛苦”，造成教授對您理解的偏差，或者對您英文表達能力的懷疑，都會使申請效果大打折扣。聯合譯通的英語母語寫作專家從事的主要工作既是幫助同樣英語為母語的顧客修改潤色文章，他們對于英語精準的感覺，深厚的功底一定能夠讓您的留學文件如虎添翼，馬到功成。
母語寫作專家在語言層面進行潤色的優點？
我們的翻譯專家認為中國申請人寫作的英語從用詞到句子結構普遍生硬，語言邏輯是“中文的”，離純正有力英語差距很大。聯合譯通的文件潤色修改服務不是簡單的換詞和糾正語法錯誤，而是以純正的書面英語標準進行修改，徹底根除英文表達方面的種種弊端。
說明：潤色服務并不涉及文件內容的修改。我們多年來接到很多要求對文件進行內容修改的請求，但內容修改是需要對客戶的綜合背景進行全面的了解，僅僅根據客戶提供的現成文件這樣殘缺信息是無法進行內容修改的，任何這樣的服務都很難說是負責的。加之客戶的原始文件在內容上良莠不齊，工作量無法確定，因此對自己寫作內容難以把握的客戶請選擇原創寫作服務。
案例展示
| 潤色前 | 潤色后 |
|---|---|
When most of people of my own age only focus on increasing material wealth for themselves, the words including ideal, conscience and sense of responsibility which were branded in my heart still have an incomparable lure to me. I walked through a long way before I can stand in front of the gate of Stanford, and the gate to my ideal. | When the sole focus of most people in my age group is wealth gathering, phrases such as ideal, conscience and sense of responsibility that have imprinted in my heart and soul during my youth still have an incomparable appeal. That is why I walked through a long way before I can stand in front of the gate of Stanford, and the gate to my ideal. |
So I chose MBA course in which I got systemic training about commercial knowledge. Meanwhile I saw clearly that the sheer commercial training could not only benefit society but could push people to the devil’s side if it would not controlled by individual self-cultivation and social norms such as sense of society, moral baseline, business responsibility boundary. For example, financial derivatives are easily made use of by makers of game regulations and used to rob the wealth to social vulnerable groups at legal name. I still remember the destination that I will reach. I thought it should be my business to seek in the future to let the astute people who mastered commercial knowledge known where their responsibilities are. | I therefore selected a MBA course of which I received systemic knowledge and business training. At the same time, I came to clear realization that without the restraint of the social responsibility, the moral bottom line, corporate responsibility, personal behavior and acceptable social conduct, this training may not benefit the society, instead it will likely to bring out the evil side of human behavior. For example, rule makers are likely to take advantage of financial derivatives and use legitimized methods to rob the disadvantaged group. I still remember the destination that I aim to reach. I thought it should be my career goal to pursue in the future to help people who highly mastered the complicated commercial knowledge to see their responsibilities. |
